by LustyLee77
You have real a great way with words,Very strong and take charge writing.Kept Me hard,I will read more of Your Storys..Thankyou..
I really liked the story but I hate to say it but it could have used a bit more force or coertion to get the conquests. Also I would have liked to see the strapon scene more detailed
I didn't think the black woman appeared to be very attracted to the pretty white women under her control. At least she didn't seem attracted to their lovely bodies. No, she seemed more interested in simply finding someone to suck on her body parts. I just didn't find it erotic.
I would've loved to see less romance and more force to in acquiring the sluts, however, story was entertaning.
Your stories start well with an interesting scene and characters but then they quickly deteriorate into trying to have as many different women as possible hook up in the same story. I like the beginning of this story with Ruby going to meet the white woman and her daughter, you should have spent more time on this, focusing on Ruby interviewing and then seducing the mom. And then maybe Ruby doing the same with the daughter. This should have been the focus of the story instead of just the intro, it would have made it much more interesting and erotic.
I just found this story and read it for the first time, the only thing I can think of is WOW! I will be reading all of your stories. Thank you for writing.
ur cunt is hairy and i hope it smmell like the fishy one every one like
Pretty quick seductions. But understandable in a short story. Loved all the pussy licking.