All Comments on 'Black Ties and Green Dresses'

Very nice!

This could be the start of something awesome!

Great start - it would be a pity if you didn't take us further.

Great until the end where you left the story (and the readers) dead in the water.

Romance??? No not really.

Erotic coupling??? Yep.

Nice start! I won't rate it as it is not finished.

Enjoyable story!

5

Thank you, Kellie. I am incredibly flattered, and fantastically astonished. You wrote this one beautifully, and the attention to detail is.. Remarkable, to say the least. Mister Gustafsson is one lucky man.

A delightful start. Where does their story go from there? Well-written but could use more backstories. And more character development. In the next chapter would be fine.

Pleasant read. Not greatly erotic.

I guess a romance as there is more to come, hopefully? I have always wondered why a woman would put garter straps over her panties. Such a bother when going to the ladies room it seems to me.

Agree with another reader that this was more erotic couplings…balcony anal on first meeting is hot and maybe intimate but not romantic. That said, it was pretty hot and your work, as a whole, is always well-written. This was another good story from you. Bravo, and thank you for sharing!

Lovely story. A follow-up would be appreciated.

Started off as a nice little fairy godmother story and ended up a hotel hook up. Romance meter was definitely declining.

Agree -Thought I was reading a modern day Cinderella story but it ran out of gas. that said you have a couple days of plot to resurrect it! LOL! 4.0*

This is more an Erotic Couplings

I hope you have more parts to turn this in to Romance.

I hope Ellen will accept Kellie's sudden romance. It looks like it could be a long distance romance which will cause both the author and her characters some difficulty, but a good writer will overcome it.

She did not find out if he had a girlfriend or if he was married. I would hate to see him just using her while he was here in the states.

She seems like the perfect Cinderella. We have the fairy godmother, in Ellen but I'm still looking for the mice. If you come up with another part, I will give a rating, right now I don't want to lower your score for a romance, if it was a Erotic Couplings it would be a 4 or higher.

Writing is not easy but I do like your story it just needs more.

Please continue! A nice slow burn to start with an unexpected ramping up to 11 with public anal. But I thought it worked. Hoping for more!