All Comments on 'Blackbird'

Too bad Jim didn't give Tillie a baby bump. They would have been happy together

Readable.

Characters were a bit cardboard.

Hated that it is in interracial section, hate the whole idea of that tag. Just put this in mature or taboo and accept that people can have different colour skin and still be normal people. The only interracial stories should be about a car racer fucking a bike racer.

I said taboo because he had set himself as parent to the girl. If she had family elsewhere, and with 3mil, plus the substantial inheritance in the bank they would have clamouring for her to live with them.

[Adds "car racer fucking a bike racer" to list of possible ideas for future stories]

She got what she wanted a hard white cock