All Comments on 'Blacked in Goa Ch. 05'

Many many thanks to writer bcoz the story is not end... I wish you continued it 🙏

Group sex is a tough thing to handle especially from a female pov and you had done of like a pro.

Very arousing story with the right amount of humour. Hope to see more from you as time permits

Please add a big black dick, which Mira can’t get easily, she gets some real pain and pleasure, who’s dick hurting her so badly and balls deep her ass. Her stomach and belly button hurting badly please 🙏🙏🙏

I read your story a few years ago and I thought you had concluded it..thank you for continuing the story and making it even better....

Can you also continue your New Car story? It has a lot of potential to become another big series??

Please add Mira’s feelings word.... as like your big dick coming my stomach, your big dick hurting my pussy so badly, Etc

Please add some real big bbc, and add her pleasure words as like ... you are so deep in my pussy or asshole, you are in my belly button, your big dick killing my pussy, I can’t take your dick anymore etc ... etc... also dirty talking with fucking men... you are are a so good writer

Just bumped into this series today and absolutely loved it!! The transition of Mira from a shy reclusive wife to a sex-crazed woman was flawless. I agree with some of the feedback here that this part didn't describe in-detail how Mira felt/reacted to sex when compared to the previous four parts but nonetheless, this made for an extremely erotic read!

If I may suggest, how about adding one of Mira's family member like her sister, sister-in-law into the series. Perhaps this family member got suspicious of Mira's behavior post her return from vacation and hence followed her to Goa where she caught her in the act. Following which, Mira and James persuaded her/seduced her and she gave in thereby cheating on her husband too. Just a suggestion. :)

Eagerly waiting for yet another blockbuster part in this series!!

Please write a sequel for the new car

You before 4 part was extraordinary, part five like a simple story bcoz you can’t describe how she’d open black guys pant or underwear and her orgasome dirty talking, please add describe everything what she doing... some realistic thinking, don’t add her family member bcoz you Indian women or men don’t like inchet sex.

I want to be the third woman being ravished. I want my pussyfooted stretched and I want to swallow all that cum. I want my husband to fuck and be fucked. I want him to kiss me as I deposit the cum from my mouth to his

Read this series in one sitting and have become a super fan of you writing. The way you change Mira from shy wife to sex addict was amazing...from not allow her husband to cum in her mouth to letting many guys cum all over her body or not going in sea as her clothes will get wet to getting naked in front of strangers and getting fucked by them...it was damn arousing!

Just one request, please don’t leave this series with open ending like some of your other stories, please give it proper end and also make Mira pregnant at some point with James child ;)

First of all I am glad that you are posting again. Thanks for that.

The series was nice and this interracial angle is fine but you get that a lot even otherwise however “The New Car” was truly Indian and might I add your best work yet. So for heaven’s sake right a couple more on that one its too good to be left alone.

I noticed one thing you never described the physical attributes of Aditi in any of the four stories. Paint us a picture of that character. She never rimmed Gurnam or Pappu make that happen. There is a lot of dirty talk waiting to happen between the characters as-well. There is a definite possibility of a gang bang, the scope to expand on that one is just too much for you to abandon the story line so early. Come on make it happen already.

I really hope you won’t disappoint us fans. Please Please write a sequel to The New Car.

Agree with Anonymous here, in fact ‘Blacked in Goa’, ‘The French Connection’ & ‘New Car’ all three stories have great potential for sequels!!

Superrr story as always! Keep it up!! The only complain I have was shouldn't Mira already become pregnant after 1 month? :P

In first 4 parts you mentioned few times that they were having unprotected sex like, 'consequences weren't lost on her', 'spurting copious amounts of thick, virile cum inside her wet, waiting and fertile pussy.' and so on!

The New Car and The French connection both are ripe for sequels but blacked in Goa I am not sure. This theme of black guys fucking non black women is been done to death same as you find on the Indian page muslim guys sleeping with hindu women its all such a cliche that its bordering on cringe. But please do look at revising The New Car, The French Connection and also The corridors of power you really must work on that as well. Like the comment earlier also mentioned I am glad you are writing again. It was a long break and we are all glad that its over.

That is such a great storyline you have left incomplete bdrew86!! The first installment of that series itself has a rating of 4.62, just goes to show how good the premise is. Please consider continuing it.

Yes I agree with anonymous here that the interracial - wife theme has been done to death on Literotica but what I meant by a sequel was basically I just want this wonderful series to have a definite end. I'm curious to know how Mira's second visit to Goa pans out and where does she go from there? Back to her family or does she leave everything behind and accompany James to US? So yeah, probably want just one more part that would give it a proper ending to know what were the consequences of this crazy vacation!

the story was good... just let Mira get pregnant this time due to his 2nd visit...

after coming back to home from goa... Mira imagined getting fucked in the same hotel room by the guys with her husband lying next to her... when they finally dropped her of to hotel and her drunk husband

I agree Mira should be pregnant

Please continue the good work and put a nice end to the series. Make Mira fall pregnant with James’ seed and pop out a black child

You should continue this bdrew , it has to complete if possible

What happened? Where is next part… all reader are waiting …

Please continue writing such stories

You are really good with these details; and I love reading these stories again n again

Please continue writing

This story writer is best… but I want to give him some advice for next part 6… bcoz long time he hasn’t written more part… I will try to give him little advice if he take it..

bdrew we need a continuation to this... this is perhaps the greatest erotica ever written

The story should have been written as the day before Raghav arrived. It need not need to be written on the background of the husband being in drunk stupor.

The flow of events was interrupted several times as Mira went to check her hubby.

Her time with Raghav was going well. It would have been more interesting if he had coaxed her to wear a bikini on the beach. Karishma would have joined them on the beach wearing a bikini and they would have a threesome. Then Raghav would have admitted that he had a white girlfriend in USA. And both partners would agree to an open marriage.

The next chapter could be: Finally after everyone has left Goa, both girls enjoy a day of lesbian loving

This is a very well written , highly erotic story. It develops from a wife who wants to protect the sanctity of her marriage to one who is seduced by a smooth operative to be blacked. In Chapter 5 , Mira is filmed while she has a gangbang.

What happens to the film?

What is her future?

I notice that the writer has not written a follow up for many years.

If he/she allows, I can write a follow up.

Still waiting for divorce to happen. Raghav earning all that money at the cost of his health for a street slut like Mira . Pathetic. Just leave that cumdump and move on