All Comments on 'Blackhawk Hall Ch. 04'

Your story was mentioned in the New Story Review thread found on Literotica's Bullitin Board in the Author's Hangout forum. ~ Red

Ok, I love your stories but the yoda-esk speech of the wizards is a little annoying.... sorry....but everything else is awesome!!

Yep, that's been mentioned before *laugh* That's just Ashtar, though. He's the only one that talks that way ;) That's the way he's always been, ever since I created him back in the 80s. He just won't let me write him any other way.

Glad you're enjoying the story!

Ahhhhhhhhhh I love it! Keep writing please!!! (:

Loving it.

Also amused by your entreaties to vote. It's almost like a coin-operated parking meter that has to be fed every so often.

I'm only giving you five stars each time, mainly because I can't give six.