by PepperxSpice
two good introductory stories... though this was my favourite.
maybe you can make your next stories a little longer, with a little more characterisation?
but great job :)
I like both these stories a lot. Seems like there is a lot you could do with someone in this position. I gave both a 5 and can't understand why they are voting lower than that. Some true rubbish gets high votes and great stories like these are down in the 3's.