All Comments on 'Blackmail Ch. 3'

by Gelflet

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Forsaken OneForsaken Oneabout 20 years ago
Good stuff

Great series!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
violence/degradation is romantic/thrilling?

i find it quite fascinating that women, so many women (not just men "perverted men") have this want, this need, to be physically and mentally tortured,,, in real life, not just in fiction like these stories,,,

somehow (both in real life and in "art" --- look at all the young women who keep saying: "my husband could never do that!", etc.) they're able to fool themselves AND the violent men they want to be with (but, hold on, dear hubby, i really love you, too! you're a good, loving husband and father to our children but your dick's too small! lol), that such degradation, such violence, was romantic!

semen from men, multiple men, who have been with multiple others, dripping from evey orifice of a woman's body is romantic, thrilling?,,, personally (can't speak for others) i think that's kinda gross,,, all those viruses and bacterias,,,

yuck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
The Descent of Susan(3)

Gelflet, A damned good story, it reads as though you are there with them, this story should go on for a further three or more chapters,

as far as to the complete degradation of Susan, to her total disregard of all she holds dear, to wallow in Matts sewer, until he gets his comeuppance that is , ones imagination could run riot with endless possibilities, Thanks for story, Gelflet please try to write further, Jem

MrswitchMrswitchabout 6 years ago
Great story but

The one thing I think was missing from this chapter is after finding out what she had attempted to do he should have made her take him in the ass as punishment. But just my 2 cents.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I agree with the other comment

She should have had to take it up the ass after trying to get out of their arrangement. Yeah, he told her to strip like a slut but that wasn’t exactly a punishment. However, great story and major turn on. If you add a fourth chapter maybe have her start to do things outside her comfort zone like being naked in public or something.

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