All Comments on 'Blackmailed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pretty messed up story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

At the end of the day, it's his word against hers so nothing would stick. And she could run away if she found things too unbearable. Setup is kinda meh.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That's quite the twist at the end!

I'd have enjoyed a tad more foreshadowing, though ...

tomasnytomasnyabout 2 years ago

Interesting plot! I was shocked that it was Nadine who planned to sell Natalie to Daniel. Please write more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You write really good one pagers. Keep em cummin!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Neat twist at the end

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