All Comments on 'Black's Magic'

To be honest, I enjoy the extrememly erotic, descriptive sex-laden stories of usually incest or interrelational matter....so I started reading this. This kis probably one of the mostintriquing stories that I have ever read in here.

Ok, it could be a lot more erotic but doesn't need to be... the bond was well outlined between them and the intimacy more than made up for the sex.

Please....submit more

Beautifully done. You are a real writer.

Subtle and erotic.

Keep it up.

The main guy character was fat, balding, and so unsuave. Definitely not the type of man most girls dream about.

I LIKED THIS STORY AND THE FACT THAT THEY BECAME FRIENDS BEFORE THEY WERE LOVERS...TWO WONDED SOULS THAT FOUND EACH OTHER...I ALSO LIKED THE FACT THAT HE WASN'T THE TRADITIONAL IDEAL MAN , TALL GOOD LOOKING MUSCLE UPON MUSCLES AND THAT HE WAS CONCERNED ABOUT HIS WEIGHT. THANKS FOR A GREAT READ.

That was a great read...it was nice to read a story about a real looking man because every man is not always real tall and built. Thanks

Well written.

to get me to feel it, but ended up liking it in the end.

This must be the sweetest, most romantic story on this site. I absolutely loved it.