by wweary101
It really was a very sensual story and told so well that it deserved an instant 5 stars. The interplay of words 'Mom' and 'Mum' was so erotic.
Emily
So erotic! A great start that's worthy of more chapters!
Loved this story line and the way Claire is handling Blanche. This has many possibilities and could be a great story if you continue writing. Blanche apparently wants to be Claires Bitch since she wrote the details in her diary/book. Keep going with this great story.
Wow! I'm incredibly aroused! This is very well written and I can't wait for more.