All Comments on 'Blank'

by AlexMarkov

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flowerGRL94flowerGRL94over 4 years ago

The monster was interesting and its interactions with Amina were tense. Once she had her mind cleared though the story became boring and not interesting to me, just a meaningless sex scene with nothing to offer to the first half of the story. Considering writing the story again with a more interesting ending.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 4 years ago
Fearless

Its nice to read a story with a good ending. Even if normally it wouldn't be, circumstances and the characters therein can make all the difference.

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