by ISawYourMommy
a totally unexpected return after many years!...your lincoln park/milf stories are classics...thanks for the new story and the comeback
What a disgusting story. I guess your mommy would be very proud.
The Colonel shut the door behind her too. Its a shame the MP had to lose his job over her.... Or was it his life...neither of them heard the shot that hit them... because that rifle is accurate up to 2000 yards with the right shooter... and Jack Reaches is good at what he is good at.
This just deserves two comments: 1st - How did her husband achieve the colonelcy, being so stupid to believe that she was "just moving some things around" while talking with him on the fone? 2nd - Who would be the military, private or not, brave enough to mess with the wife of special force element? Paraphrasing the text: This went DOWN and never came UP...The return to LW with a sad plot and even worst characters...1*
ignore the nutjob naysayers commenting on free fantasy stories...good to have you back and please bring back the excellent lincoln park mommy herself
That's why you're such a sick freak. Seeing her scarred you for life.
What an idiotic crap! Where is the loving wive part at your crap?
Everyone's seen your mommy. That's why you don't know who your daddy is.
Great story. We'll written. I was an MP for a time and knew several guys who were taking care of the lonely wives while the unit was deployed. More than a few ended up facing adultery charges for it. In the real world, this would piss me off. But as a story, this was hot. I enjoyed it. Thanks for the great read.
I disliked the characters. I dislike the subject matter but you have to admit that it was very well done.
It's been eight years since we heard from you -- I hope you keep writing. Thanks for another great story.
J
Well written story. I was sure it would end atItch her husband still listening.
I had lost hope that we would ever see another story from you--so God knows why I glanced at your history recently, but luckily I did. Excellent, as always.
Racoons aren't rodents f'chrissake.
Otherwise, lovely story. Thanks.
An author called Gianna Quinn has this story word for word on sale on amazon...I think you have been plagiarised.