All Comments on 'Blessings Ch. 03'

Not because I want to see it end, but because I'm all wrapped up in it now and hoping the siblings will end up together. We will see, won't we? Thanks for a really great tale; one of the very best!

Cassie is cheating on him with her trainer at the gym,and he finds out about it.That lets him free to have Amanda. That's what I like. Thanks for the story....Rich

This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read, period. I can't wait to see how this turns out!

I feel like your having the brother being mean to the sister and I feel like his girlfriend is up to something the way she just sort of all but moved in with him. It feels like she can't do anything wrong in his parents eyes. The way this chapter ended was to sad hurry up and get the brother and sister together.

This is by far the most well written story I have ever seen here. Construction is varied and the content is rich. Could you tell Mandy that fishing rods do float?

Just when it looked as if they were FINALLY going to make some meaningful forward progress, we have....the ring! (Looking forward to Ch.04!)

-- KK in Texas

Another great from you Mused. Just a pity it's only 4 chapters, I wouldn't want the last one to feel rushed to get everything done, but I'm sure you'll do great with it.

such great build-up and tension, Mused. No one can write it like you. And what's this? An engagement? Poor Amanda, I feel so bad for her. Just when she thinks she's going to get her man - BAM! - Kevin lays the engagement to Cassie on her.

Oh NO He did not but a ring for Cassie!

And if he doesn't give it to Cassie, he'd better not offer that same ring to Amanda! That's not cool!

Heh! Great story Mused! You sure have us readers stirred up with that engagement ring ending! I love all the little realistic touches to your writing -- the endless turkey chili after Thanksgiving, the way Amanda looks at a little black nightie, her back and forth whether to buy it or not, the way she stuffs it into the bottom of her shopping bag, the way Kevin describes what classes she should take, which professors to avoid, etc. All of that is completely realistic, which is what makes your stories so enjoyable.

Poor Amanda, so close!

So sad!!!

Whoa! In a totally unforeseen flash, out of left-field and the fires of damnation, the Horsemen of the Apocalypse pounce upon the delicate soul and heart of a very fragile, emotionally laden young maiden!! Her realistic Romeo has cast her heart and soul into the darkness of the nether life--she suddenly appears to have lost her will to live!!

So, so very sad, as I shed tears for her dilemma. If the writer is talented, gifted and caring for her character's images (as I'm sure she is), she will rescue our fair maiden and pronounce--as she has not see the engagement ring her brother Kevin bought for his sister's nemisis Cassie--his wishes for her hand in eternal marital love and adoration and respect, and place the ring on his sister's left ring finger at Christmas!!

Loved this chapter too- the measured pace and the resentment Mandy has for her brother's girlfriend is great. The kiss was a bit surprising because they'd hidden their feelings from each other and for it to suddenly burst into the open like this. That said, this is one of the best stories of this genre on here with a solid plot and great characters.

That would destroy anybodys will to live.

That is sad she is in love with him and he is going to marry the other women

The continuing struggle is great.

And sad.

I love how Mandy's feelings are at their height and she's told him how she feels but he's not at the same place as her at the same time. A sad reality for lots of would-be-couples.

Sounds awful like Kevin's in denial though!

Ooooooooooooo! The drama! I didn't see that engagement ring coming at all!