All Comments on 'Blind Date'

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jzimmerlijzimmerliover 17 years ago
Ahhh

OK the story line itself is ok but there are a lot of edits needed..is the sister Dorthy or Jenny? Along with the instead of there or they.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
E for Effort

The editing was bad, but I loved the story line and your descriptions were great.

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