All Comments on 'Blind Date'

I loved your story and look forward to reading more of your work.

Great story, there were a few tense errors and other minor grammatical errors that a competent proofreader would have caught. Suggest that you have a proofreader review any more submissions so your story can be PERFECT.

I enjoyed reading your romance. I particularly enjoyed the part about the shaking orange window covers. I would like to know where I may obtain a set.

Most word processors have a grammer program. If you used the program after you finish your writing you could eliminate many of the grammatical errors that pepper your writing. You will soon learn the difference between to and too. That does not add to four

I enjoyed reading your romance. I particularly enjoyed the part about the shaking orange window covers. I would like to know where I may obtain a set.

Most word processors have a grammer program. If you used the program after you finish your writing you could eliminate many of the grammatical errors that pepper your writing. You will soon learn the difference between to and too. That does not add to four

It's too bad the person who commented on your grammar doesn't know how to spell the word!!

Great story and I love the emotion that you put into their love making. It was a touching story and very erotic love scenes, but as the others said the slight errors in grammar took a little away from it. Please keep writing so that we may enjoy more, Thank you for sharing this story with the rest of us.

Yes, there were some grammar issues, but not to the point that they overshadowed the piece. Trust me I am a huge grammar critic and will stop reading a piece if I feel that it detracts me from the story. Don't let the critical assholes on her get you down. Your style is fantastic and I would love to see another piece from you soon!

which I enjoyed reading though the sex scenes were a bit long winded. Very tender and loving - would have liked for her friend to come back and share in the happy moment too. A good story with a happy ending.

Fair, but too much like a Girl's Own story. Life is almost always much more complicated than that.

What a great romance story. I really like how they were able to find each other again and finally be together.5***** toby9790.

You are a fucking wanker

hello, oh it's you, a person I haven't seen in 15 years, during which I was married to someone else.

I love you,

let's get married.

Remind me again, what is your last name now?

A pleasure to read a story where love reigns supreme as two people who never should have parted rediscover each other. Such a moving tale,full of emotions that I didn't care about grammar,spelling,death,and taxes.

this one just belongs in fuck fest, there is no romance here. EXTREMELY unlikely story...maybe they should say hello to each other before the dogs fuck.