All Comments on 'Blind Girl's Bluff'

Well written despite the fact that Geoffrey was a conniving jerk but I liked the joke ended up being on him (and figured that it would be). Good banter and it was nice to see them taking the chance for more at the end. Very nice job.

I'd like more of this couple - they seem like long-termers, who would be interesting to follow.

Excellent !!

There was a "cuteness" about this I really enjoyed. Great dialogue and good work.

Geoffrey is my new hero... and I can have dreams of Sophie's beauty...I hope you continue because you sure have talent and this story needs several more chapters. Great work I will be looking for the next chapter.

Nice!!!! A little bit of a dick-move to start the relationship, but a happy ending for the Super fun and hot blind girl!!! She was a nice character!!

Very fun! I hope to read more about them soon.

"Cal is not treating her well so let me rape her to make it right." Sorry but if this is your idea of romance -fantasy or not- you will be disappointed in life.

As a storyline I’m with LordAuch, it’s completely flawed and he is without any moral compass for trying it, regardless of how it turned out. The end does not and never will justify the method.

That aside, it’s fair writing, but the characters are very two dimensional and the narrative doesn’t build anything to speak of, not really sure this is a romance tbh. 4 stars.

I admit that I am new -- and still figuring things out -- but based on the description for the category (Romance - Drama, love, risk, and happily-ever-afters.) -- I'm not convinced I picked the wrong one. Thanks for reading and I will endeavor to do better.

Definitely romance, though more than a little underhanded to start, but she put the stop to that quickly.

Good story!

4

I really liked it. See comments after Part 2. Outstanding!

It’s more than a little condescending that he thought it was ok to try and trick her but by artistic license it turned out really well and romantic too. Loved this chapter.

Thxs

Tess (uk)

5 star

"She likes fresh air" ...because some people like pollution. xD Sorry couldn't resist.

When I started reading this story I had serious reservations. I figured you were a soulless pervert. However I went down the path willingly and you wove a compelling, humorous, and maybe even interesting story. Impressive.

Catching up with the series - good stuff so far. 4.6*

The "girl's bf is a dick" setup will never appeal to me, I think.