All Comments on 'Blinded by Lust'

The story was really good and you're obviously a good writer, but if I'm honest I was a little disappointed by the ending. This may just be my sick imagination, but I liked the idea that she was the twin sister and then he'd have to grovel and they'd fall in love and end up together. (for all the haters I get that this would never happen in real life, but hey it's my fantasy.) Your ending is probably technically better, it was a nice twist that I didn't see coming, but less satisfying for me personally. Saying that the fact that I care what happens in the end is a mark that the story drew me in and kept me interested. Sorry for long rant I'm just bitter because I was hoping for a longer series of chapters of your awesome writing with a happily ever after! So well done!

This was my first try at really finishing a story no matter how short it is. I really appreciate that you have taken the time to read and even better comment on my story and characters. Sorry for the mistakes in my wording and grammar when I write I tend to go into my own world and then you don’t see the mistakes you've made even when editing. For all the positivity I am so grateful, your encouragement gives me the confidence to keep trying x

loved it....great twist at end...of course would prefer it to be a twin and have cade fall in love but no much better

As a one off story I thought the ending was a great twist in this genre!

more please!!!

Awww thats genuinely sad

WTF!!