All Comments on 'Blizzard Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Another great chapter!

First of all I love how frequently you post! I’m also really glad you had one of the girls actually really notice and for the most part deduce what was happening on her own. It really gave the chance to emphasize that these girls aren’t stupid teenagers but that they’re actually really intelligent. And I’m not gonna lie, it broke my heart when Max said Sam had called her a garbage friend. I really enjoy this story because it’s a romance story with sexual things sprinkled in, rather than a sex story with some romance and funny characters here and there. Keep writing and stay your course on this story!

Timtom12Timtom12about 4 years ago
Yay for chapters!

Love your content. Unfortunately, this chapter feels less edited and clear than the previous ones.

Why is a car necessary if the store is right across the street?

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984about 4 years ago

Really loving the build up on these. Looking forward to more. Good work redsliver.

redsliverredsliverabout 4 years agoAuthor
Re: Yay for chapters!

Technically, Gene's apartment is BEHIND the supermarket. But more importantly, Alex and Peter needed the TRUNK of the car to transport the amount of food, toiletries, and odds and ends they bought.

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