All Comments on 'Blonde Bait Ch. 02'

Finally, a fitting sequel to Blonde Bait. I like it. Please post Chapter 3 soon.

For the read.

after this long since the first chapter you disapoint with so little story. It was written well enough I suppose, just not very interesting.

After reading a dozen of her stories, the formula is standard.

She gets cruelly chained and brutally tortured.

The twist here is she is doing it voluntarily to get employed.

Is the market for her services really so bad she has to endure sexual humiliation and physical pain just to work?

"It was written well enough I suppose, just not very interesting." Actually, it is the opposite. The story, this, the previous ones and those that came later in several chapters are interesting stories, but they aren't good writing at all, starting with the issues of composition ("Composition 101,' I should add).