All Comments on 'Blood & Magic Ch. 01'

Not a very mature opening.

We'll see how your tastes and writing change over the next 9 years.

Other than being more adolescent than necessary to get the point across, it looks like the start of an interesting story. Unless the vamp really is thirteen years old.

But as a reader, I'm so embarrassed for Kristin at the end, that I can't imagine much coming about that will stop her being the laughing stock of the police force.

Just my opinion. Thanks for posting

Great story...