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All Comments on 'Blood Bride Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

More!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I've found that Great Blue Herons are far less addictive than the Grays. Something to consider in the next chapter.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
A very yummy start!

I enjoyed the start of this immensely! Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
very good

can't wait for more, I really love these types of stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I read this, and keep reading it hoping and praying for part two... PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
constructive criticism

This story feels very quickly strung together. More like a draft than a complete story.

Don't take me wrong; it's good and has potential, but it could have been even better with an editor and grammar-check.

I hope you keep writing and honing the skill, though! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Please give us another chapter!!

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 6 years ago
Really good first chapter!

I really enjoyed this story, I wish you would go back and create a second one. Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us.

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

First chapter really bites. Chapter two also excellent but needing more

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I happen to enjoy writing stories. Much of what I put on here is actually a rough draft or something I don't wish to publish. It's bits and pieces of scenes in longer pieces.

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