by bleuangele
You do an amazing job of drawing the reader into your charecters and making us want to know what happens next. I hope to see more chapters in this soon!
This is a really good story, please upload the next chapter soon.
The story was amazing. It was very descriptive and very entertaining. I love to see strong but seductive vampires. I can't wait to read more. Your story telling is amazing. Keep up the good work.
Very nice beginning! I'm really looking forward to more(: ~L.
Very good story beginning, intriguing and well written. But why does a man who obviously reviles slavery so much take so much pleasure from forcing a woman who has no choice?
please continue!!!! this was the most engrossing story i ever read. please come out with the next chapter quickly.