All Comments on 'Blood is Not Thicker Than Water'

When I got to the bit where Max discloses what he found in the safe, I almost wet myself. And I'm not talking pee here! The sex scenes you'd already written were extremely hot, but when you added that extra bit of incest kink, they assumed orgasmic properties! This is a wonderfully dirty story, Dg. Beautifully plotted and written. I've given it 5 stars and I'm keeping my fingers crossed for you in the Crime & Punishment contest. Good luck. (In my mind, you've already won it!)

Hot AF

Very good. Third story of yours I've read today, I liked it a lot. I wish there were more scoring stars; for me 5 is perfection and you have a few editing errors that I stumbled over. I'm assuming that you were fighting a deadline, but overall I truly enjoyed 95% of the story. (The father/daughter complication I don't think was necessary.) I hope you keep writing; it can be very satisfying for both reader and writer, don't you think?

4 stars - not my kind of story, but the plot was well written.

I liked it, different, but well told

Scores 4/5

Very nice. I love it when the protagonist's breasts increase in size...

5+

Beautifully written. So glad that Victor got his. And Ava, Max and Onyx lived happily ever after . . . .

Enjoyable, well written story.

Thought this would be about Victor, a sleazy ruthless old man lusting after his daughter. This was about two consenting adults falling in love after years of lusting for each other. Who turned out to be father and daughter. It's not their fault no one told them. 🤷🏾‍♀️🤣😂