by aaddicted
hehehe I had to read this all over again and it gets better each time! :)
Pleaseee I hope you write another chapter quickly! :) LOVED IT LOVE this story!
Glad to know dat u finaly posting the new chapter. Waiting for the next one.
Enjoying watching where this story goes and of course loving all the loving everyone's getting!
Very well written. Keep up the good work.. please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter =D
I was waiting and worried that you would not finish this story. I like how the characters are developing. I also like th intrigue of the lab destruction and the vampire hunter/killer.
Please don't quit on this story, I find myself addicted and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
Please update soon! I really want to know what happen haha... Elizabeth & Keo is very intriguing indeed haha... I find them very amusing haha...., but yes update soon!
cant wait for you to write the next one, please do it soon cant wait to read it
another unfinished story, WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Flowing story. Well intoned and sound. Interest, dark and profound with a mystery in terms of direction. Well re-edited. Just the Vampire who always did and threatened so much to deserve extinction seems here pathetic? Or empathetic. And I usually skip or skim non human cat! No more praise than that. But of course this is centrally an eroticism site. And I have lambasted other writers and sick mockists and moralists for abusing this site. And at the same time try to run a stake thru the heart of those who confuse sex with violence to deepen their own corruption and draw others. Those that rape mentally the unachievable, then relate it real. This latter like Anti-Vivisectionists who harm and terrorise some of their own biped species! This from an ex-vegan. Distractions. All But to say this is such fine writin to draw in the innocent victim to offer their neck! A prolific well done across the whole 'book'. The sex platinum diamond nugget quality, but just as rare. And involves such Deep digging to fully appreciate.
I'm very intrigued by your story of Roderick and Lilith!! Please, please, please finish this story out....as now I'm on edge to find out what happens to all of the characters!! You have a great gift of storytelling and I thank you for sharing it with us!!!
You really have a great writing style and a brillant story line. All the characters and their interactions keep you wanting to know what happens next. It's the best I have read on this site so far and would have a real shot at being published, if it had been finished. I really hope you are able to to continue/complete the story soon.
When I started reading the series I never expected someting so bloody amazing. Please finish, I cannot wait till the next installement. I can still not figure out it you are a man or woman. You are an amazing writer. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I just finished reading all the chapters so far in one night and cannot wait for the next i do hope that you will continue!
I love this story!!! I wish you would continue with it! I would love to see what happens with the characters! More please!!!!!!
Sometimes I wish I would check a story like this before I start to see if it is complete or at least to see if it's on going. A really good story I'm hooked on where it's been a almost a year since the last chapter posted. A real pity.
this tale just got better and better.
when/if possible, come back and finish it.
pleeeeaaassse ;0)