All Comments on 'Blood-Red Orchids'

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SerranoirSerranoiralmost 15 years ago
Tears here

A well told story. The characters were people you could care about and cry for ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good story... with a caveat

I enjoyed the story, it had interesting elements both erotic and melancholy. That said, maybe get someone who actually speaks spanish to edit the more erotic-themed phrases - it's really disconcerting for a spanish speaker to read them as they are. It took me out of the moment a bit... also some of it was some sort of bastardized italian??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Five.

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