All Comments on 'BloodBorne Ch. 01'

good to have you back, really excited to see how this segment takes shape

Glad to have you back....can't wait to read more

nice to have the new story.

only one remark, shorten the paragraphs for easier reading? ;-)

Looking forward to more. Interesting beginning, and Xan was fun.

Thank you for continuing the story. I have been checking off and on on your site to see if you submitted one.

I enjoyed reading of their adventures again. I impatiently await the next chapter.

I am so glad you are back!!! I have read and reread the rest of The Breathren series and have been needing more.

This story is a great read and i am now sitting here waiting for the next installment with baited breath!!!

Im so glad to see another brethren installment I love your stories they are so full of detail you can almost feel each characters thoughts and emotions as you read along. Please keep them coming!

The next installment has begun. Yay! So like an addiction and now I have received another fix. I am so excited that you have returned. I look forward to the coming chapters. Good start;)

~Sarabell

I love the Brethren!

Now. Unfortunately, that's impractical :*(

but each installment makes me more and more upset, not more satisfied. I keep reading for hope of something in the works for Nadia (irrational, I know) and some peace for all of them. Hopefully I will see Liam get his peace in this series.

omg as much as i love this first chapter, please dont tell me you are going to make Liam gay. No offense to gay people, but i have always fantasized about Liam since the first time he was mentioned, which marked him as straight.

I agree, I always thought of Liam as straight. I really wanted him to find a strong, caring female. I also always hoped that Nadia would come back. I know that this is your story and as such you are free to tell it how you see fit. But I can't help being disappointed at the way it's going.

I bet Xan is a woman posing as a man so she could get into the Dymos. It is even hinted at where she is described. Feminine touch to the face, long neck, semi-musculine husky voice.. I'm sure Xan is a woman. Besides, no boy will have the cheeks to call Liam stalkerazzi and Alexis scarface. It's a woman alright.

Or so I hope... :D

So I am absolutely obsessed with your work, you have to continue it! I think the woman disguised as a man would be an amazing twist, because I know that Liam really needs a hard ass woman to boss his ass around. Please continue!

I really love your installments! I can agree with some of the other viewers because I wanted to see Nadia back even though I should just come to terms that she is gone. I also wanted to see who was going to calm Liam down. It would be nice for the Liam to be a mentor to Xan. I also hope that Liam does not turn out to be gay. No offense to anyone but I would like to see the type of woman that could actually calm him down. Also very happy that you are back!!!

I really don't know about the idea of Xan being a woman, that would be somewhat awkward,I mean they could just be gay, or have Xan an older sister that is at home waiting for him. but anyways I really like your story and hope to get another chapter very soon.

is a fiesty lil shit, huh? Spunky, bravado, "tude", all rolled into a lil package...and can make Liam want to bite railroad spikes in half....lol...I love it...Xan is a woman...lol...gotta be....in fact, Xan sounds like some of my female kin...hehehe and Liam is fixin to get his whole world dumped on its ass...hehehehe.....fireworks would be putting it mildy...I see world war III in the making...Liam has never been what one would call....ummmm....patient and Xan has (her) own short fuse...DAAAAMMMMNNNN!!!!

I hve been waiting for your next story and I' so glad you decided to post it now!! Love it so far -- on to the next chapter!

Really pleased to see you posting again, looking forward to the rest of this story!

is liam in for the shock of his life....LOL

you did great again.

a challenge xN

No offense to they gays, I have two gay best friends, but I want Liam to meet his match in a woman. Sorry if I sound picky.