All Comments on 'Bloodlines Ch.01'

Holy shit this was amazing.

Love the storyline as well as the way you're telling it. I can only imagine the intracacies of emotions your describing. Well done

You're telling a story and nailing it!

Excellently done. Nice pace, good development, nothing too heavy-handed.

I'll look forward to seeing what comes next, and hope it's another hundred chapters.

Thank you for sharing your work. Looking for more of course!

Very different to the usual type of story. I look forward to a steady development of the theme. But please, not just sex only. The theme is too subtle for that.

Thank you for the story. Id like more say a book worth

5 stars. More would be a good thing. I hope to find he has more things he can do with this amazing power than seduce folks for sex.

Great start to the story! I look forward to reading chapter two and really hope you continue to develope the story and publish further chapters.

Wow - what just happened? Very intense...5*

Great start and very promising. I look forward to learning about his uncle because that seems like a story worth knowing about. I wonder how many of these people don’t survive their birthday present as it were. If you get beat that badly then you really can’t determine the outcome which can vary from bruising with a concussion all the way to brain damage or death. While the benefit of surviving it is awesome, that depends on if you are a neuropath and if you survive in tact. Can you imagine someone with that power with brain damage where they don’t understand yet their emotions are raw and strong or possibly someone in a coma with that power where they are just blasting out emotional cues across the area. It could make for a wild time and very dangerous. I’m looking to see how this all plays out and just how powerful he becomes and what his uncle has in store for him. Thanks for the five star episode and especially for this type of story which I have always loved.

J.D.

Well written and thought out. Explain the purpose of the beating.

The beatings are a remnant of my original plot, this started out as a story based on the mechanics detailed in Brandon Sanderson’s Mistborn epic, though copyright issues and Literotica rules forced me to reinvent the plot. Simply put, the beatings trigger latent powers in the neuropath’s DNA, inherited from the progenitor. If you want details we can label it as a H3K4me3, causing an upregulation of the Hippocampus as a fear-response. ;)