All Comments on 'Bloodlines Ch.02'

I am pleased that the story has a new development at the end of this chapter, and await the next instalment with that and the girl neighbour. Gently does it

You are doing a wonderful job with this story! I am really enjoying it!

Great read thank you!

So is it the government or the group watching him? I hope we find out soon. good story. Keep sharing with us please. 5Stars.

Answers are coming in the next chapter, rest assured. Thank you all for the comments, I’m just getting started with this series, I think. I have several twists and turns in mind as we go, but the timeline is not set in stone.

Damn - great writing, no other way to say it! The character and plot development are exemplary and I really look forward to watching the story unfold. 5*

English has developed rules over the centuries for good reason. You can’t have multiple characters speaking in the same paragraph unless you want to confound your audience. This is taught very early in composition but apparently your skill as a writer hasn’t reached the middle school level.

Is Professor Sands a reference to JC Beleren's story?