All Comments on 'Bloodlines Ch.07'

by MiddleAgedMan

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AZslyderAZslyder10 months ago

Good story and concept, but your transitions need a lot of help....this was all over the place, zero flow whatsoever

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago
My fingers are getting sore hanging from the cliff…

This story deserves a middle and an ending!

AardieAardie2 months ago

I guess that’s it.

MiddleAgedManMiddleAgedMan2 months agoAuthor

I have not quit the story, it’s just been a turbulent year and I’ve hit a bit of a snag in the progression. I have well over half of the next chapter on paper already, it’s mostly about getting the proper setup for the continuation.

I’m not giving any promises on a timeline here, but my schedule clears up a great deal after Easter, and I typically have more inspiration to write when the weather is warmer and sunnier.

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Update, January '24 I am very sorry for the long wait, life has been turbulent the past six months, with very little time to spare. In addition, I have hit kind of a road block in my story, and I'm struggling to get the story to evolve the way I want it. I appreciate the feed...

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