by MiddleAgedMan
Good story and concept, but your transitions need a lot of help....this was all over the place, zero flow whatsoever
This story deserves a middle and an ending!
I have not quit the story, it’s just been a turbulent year and I’ve hit a bit of a snag in the progression. I have well over half of the next chapter on paper already, it’s mostly about getting the proper setup for the continuation.
I’m not giving any promises on a timeline here, but my schedule clears up a great deal after Easter, and I typically have more inspiration to write when the weather is warmer and sunnier.