All Comments on 'Blood's Kiss'

Great beginning for you...There is detail but not overbearing with the descriptions of their looks and emotions...Can't wait to see where they go from here...

Cheers...

K~

you have to keep going!

Braze, nice start to your tale. You kept with the legends ... vampires can pick up memories and emotions, they can't enter a domicile until they have been invited inside by the residents (How many times does that happen on Literotica??) I agree... this could make the start of a good series.

This is so good, you have to write more!