by SamanthaMeyers
Great finale for now, but rather rushed. Expand upon these events, feel free to throw some psychology in there
I’m not sure that once they had McAllister admitting to making Ryan suck him for the promotion, that he wouldn’t have gotten it without, and that he would have to keep it going to stay in the position, they didn’t stop. That confession and admission was enough to get him fired and divorced. Why then did Ryan have to suck him again and Lynn have to fuck him?! I do t get that. That only makes them look very bad to all those they showed the video to. All of that seemed overkill and unnecessary.
I loved it. It got me hard as a rock. Fuck the bull shit about why did they do this or why did they do that. It was the sex that worked for me, not the law office bull shit. Keep writing and forget about the nay sayers!!!