by AirWrites
Plot and overall idea was excellent. I enjoyed it totally. Mrs Bloomers is fantastic character. I would love to see her compete with Mrs Savage :) Also less Mr Hopper is better. New male character gave more fresh to this series.
My wish - more descriptions. Take your time with writing about blowjob and especially anal sequence. Idea with the teacher "sacrifices" herself - absolutely top. That was such a whore act.
The best episode for a long time :)
You're so quick to fall into the same pattern of your other story and those chapters it's almost copy paste change a name and location. It was a decent story but take your time, slow down build the plot better. I mean a teacher isn't going to just give it up that easily to a demanding student, I would have had him take pictures and blackmail her. Just my thoughts
I think if you started writing Blowjob School stories without using the words "shoved" or "rammed," the quality would instantly double.