All Comments on 'Blue Ch. 04'

Wow does not even begin to describe the power of your story!! I am so entranced by the characters and the flow of your story. Please please don't stop writing whether it be more of Blue or a new story. Simply wonderful!!! Waiting with baited breath.....

Where to begin, you have crafted a wonderful and emotional story. From chapter1 I fell in love with your characters. you make the three dimensional you give them a range of depth that is not seen with many authors on here you are truly one of the few. Keep writing can not wait to read your next series.

I literally have no words to describe how much I love your stories and especially your writing. Everything flows seamlessly and continues to entrall me everytime you write something new. Thank you sooo much for writing these stories and sharing them with us, you really really have an amazing gift!

i have read this story as each one was posted and i hardly ever leave comments but i must say that what you have written in this story will resonate with those of us that can relate to blue,i won't go into my personal details but your story had me literally reliving some of my most horrible moments in life but i believe this story is a healing story and i believe it has done that for me and hopefully others

u r absolutely the best writer here. thank u so much for the wonderful stories!

The DRAMA!!! You've got a more real and delicate side (not to be confused with all this wrist-cutting emo shit) that shows through in some places. Do try to cultivate it.

That was epic! Erotica alone can be exciting, & romance alone can be heartwarming, but erotica & romance has a resonance that you just can't get from the separation of act & emotion. This story has the perfect combination. Thank you!

this story was amazing but how did blue and harly share the dream

It's sad that with the sites updates, the original comments disappeared so I thought I'd comment again. As usual the characters and story line was great. The only complaint would be I would have had more depth to them just because they were fascinating but maybe it would have been to intense considering what Blue went through. Love happy endings. Thanks for sharing your talent with the public.

I have read all of your stories and loved them all. You are one of the writers that I am always on the look out for. I hope to see more of your work soon.

Why only four chapters? I want to read more about Blue and Harley i also want to know about his family and how they all got along in the last four or five years with Blue, i can't believe they would act that to their own child???

How do you forgive something like that? I like to know how they go to earn Blue's forgiveness???

I am so happy Blue finally trusts Harley. If you can, it would be great if you could add another chapter. This such a good story.

It would be nice to know what happened between the end and when Decisions started. I guess I'll have to reread that. Did they ever buy their own house or did Blue become a teacher like he dreamed. I just don't remember now. Sorry!!! :(

more more more

this is a wonderful story. i would love to see an epilogue, though. it would just be nice to see harley and blue happy in the future now that all the bad guys have been captured.

Shame there was not another chapter to really finish this off

I was raped when I was younger and while was looking for something to read to get me off this story touched my heart in away words will never describe. I enjoyed it