All Comments on 'Blue Collared'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is so hot, the slow burn is amazing and I can’t wait for the next one!

AlphaLyonAlphaLyonabout 3 years ago

real men don't order steak well done; they order it rare or med-rare. just kidding.

great start. keep going.

RSchwulerRSchwulerabout 3 years ago

Very well-written, excited to see what happens next!

motoskootamotoskootaabout 3 years ago

Very nice buildup., an element often overlooked in many Literotic submissions. Well-written, and the dialog feels natural.

matteol77matteol77about 3 years ago

Congratulations is very well written. The description of the characters is fundamental and you did it very well. Please continue

matandamatandaover 2 years ago

Don’t get the low ratings on this. So we’ll written and can’t wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So fucking hot. Hope we get to see what happens next!

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just a very kinky boy in the NYC area writing what comes to mind. i'm exploring some more taboo ideas here that arent always the most popular, so if you're squeamish when it comes to raunch, domination, and degradation, i suggest looking elsewhere. but, if you're here for me, ...