by touchkissbite
This is so hot, the slow burn is amazing and I can’t wait for the next one!
real men don't order steak well done; they order it rare or med-rare. just kidding.
great start. keep going.
Very nice buildup., an element often overlooked in many Literotic submissions. Well-written, and the dialog feels natural.
Congratulations is very well written. The description of the characters is fundamental and you did it very well. Please continue