All Comments on 'Blue Hawaiian'

first story and very believable.

What a great story! I don't often comment but this story was worth logging on to let you know how much I enjoyed it.

Nicely done

There can be no hotwife without a willing cuckold (and a slut of course)

For a first story, you should have been smart enough to put a cuckold tag at the beginning. That cost you big time.

More crap. This site is quickly going downhill.

Very good, very hot, first story

Great story. Other than some typos itcwas well written and enough suspense to keep it going. Loved it.

Nicely done. Look forward to future writings.

Chad of "Chad & Tyrone" fame. You write extremely well, and you almost climbed out of the stereotype mold in which this tired and weak genre of stories always exists.

Don't listen to the haters. An excellent story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Dioshits below don’t know the difference between a cuckold relationship and a stag/vixen one. You can share your wife without the humiliation you find in some cuckold relationships.

I hope you continue this

My only question is why no one knew she was married. Did she take her rings off regularly when she went put for GNO's. If so, she was looking for a hookup the whole time. If not, Chad and the older guy would have honed right in on it.

Good story anyway.

Thought “hotwifing” was a consensual thing.. you damn cucks don’t know which way is up.

Was excellent and she should tell him back story that she already knew him. Lies crest problems . Truth especially with a husband willing to explore can be fun I guess . Not for me personally but hot for stories. A past friend would Do the bar thing make like strangers but have a room nearby to complete the night . He said it was a great fun thing to do except he found out that on a night out with her best friend coworker where she was staying over they hooked u with two guys and went to there apt to fuck all night . A friend of his saw them and called him . He texted her hey how’s the night she said great heading to the friends house now . He was parked there already , she texted two hours later home and settled in see you tomorrow afternoon. He stsyed there in his car and around 1030 the next morning they got out of her car in clothing the wore out . He startled them with nothing like a fresh fucked look doing the walk of shame . He said mind as well stay here I know you left with two guys and clearly said at his place fucking . Divorce was done in a year