All Comments on 'Blue Jeans'

Great (hot) well written story. Keep writing. The way it's told leaves little doubt that the girl is trying to seduce them. It's easy to imagine some follow up with his side of the story and end it with just one threesome. Don't ruin it by repetitive

Great first story! This is so awesome. I hope you'll continue this!

beauty mate . best written piece i think i've read on L. Most erudite I mean and a great read .. ok off to part two ..

What a discovery! I was referring to you and not the action, lol. Always great to find another Aussie especially when the writing is of such quality. At this time you only have posted one other story. Hopefully we can expect more soon?!