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All Comments on 'Blue Sea, Green Earth, Red Sky'

by SandyMarl

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Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Quite a long story for a contest but surprisingly passed quite quickly. Possibly the 3 ceremonies were a little long and repetive but really loved the way Marco took them on board as Maribeth and he found their way forward.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 2 years ago

Quite colorful, especially in regards of its vocabulary. Really enjoyed the chase for the small differences that made every part of the 'routine' a special occasion. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice story 5 🌟

John9935John9935over 1 year ago

Masterful story Generously sprinkled with alliteration which I found clever. The story within the story was so well done. Loved this

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I am a curious individual (that may be said of me in several ways); I want to see what's around the corner or over the next hill. I am a scientific person and I use my education in the sciences to run my own company. I love the play of lush, rich words in the English languag...