All Comments on 'Bluebird'

Don't stop now

A wonderful coming of age story for two innocent siblings. So much happens at cabins that often are left unfinished for a lifetime.

Danielle seems like a very loving sister that will build up Sam's confidence. Her acceptance and care of brother's penis and encouragement can be a life changing experience.

I hope this continues

The flowery language feels stilted and fake , as well as being distinctly unappealing. Constantly using shuttered instead of shuddered is distracting. Nice effort but lacking in appeal.

That was awkward to read. I kept imagining Nigella Lawson narrating this with all your sterile scientific wording.