All Comments on 'Bluepilled Ch. 01'

Well done! And well written, I can't wait to read more of this. Thank you!

Great story! I love making the mom a sort of domestic slave, love her dialogue and the tone she uses. Here's hoping he gets Stephanie as a slave next! If possible, I hope he degrades both of them :)

Very well thought out, written and presented.

Loved this read, enjoyed how the mother became more dependent for the son throughout. Would’ve loved more of the casual groping like the ass grab.

Hope to see a new chapter soon.

Very well written and satisfying. How long until Stephanie becomes a member of his new harem? Hopefully Helen has some hot MILF's to introduce to her son as well.

it should be fun to read any following chapters. this was very good, i gave you 4 stars. thanks

Looking forward to more!

This was incredible. I loved the scientific basis. I had never heard of tonic immobility. It was well written. I need me some more bluepill. Can't wait for more.

I really liked your story really looking forward to continuing

Looking forward to more .

very well written

Looking forward to more!

I think you may have accidentally created something actually addictive here, because I need MORE!

Please?

Absolutely fantastic, whatever you do pls make more chapters. This is stunning, with some truly fantastic moments

I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading the rest.

Thank you.

Great story. I love how he addresses the issue of morality at the end there - and then tosses it in the trash.

This is one sick pseudo-scientist you've created here. He needs Help, not a Harem!

Whoa. Damn you evil devil genius....

Chuckles. This sure works!

Wonderful.

To the Anon who commented the MC was a sicko and needed help, I agree. Where do I sign up? I volunteer to help out with the under used sluts that will build up as he constantly adds to his harem.

omgoodness, a sick pseudo-scientist in mind control story on an erotica website? How unpredictable! Not like Anon down there was going LOOKING for someone to call a sicko. Nope. Couldn't be that.

A classic concept, well-executed but without adding anything new to the formula. The evolution from mom to slave was a blitzkrieg, leaving little time to savor possible incremental changes.

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It jumped off the cliff there at the end. Suddenly he realizes he needs a harem and to become lord and master to many women. OK, sure, let's roll with it. This could be fun.

What a mother fucker ,let the fun begin.