All Comments on 'Blueprints Of A Happy Life'

Overall good story, almost too short but better that than too long. 5*

Hope for a follow-up ?

Nice to know they went into the sunset,hand in hand,and......?

Thanks for a good story.

Great character development! A great story with such developed & likable characters will leave readers wanting more. So 'More please'!

And thank you for sharing

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This is a beautiful story...I liked reading this one. I would have to agree with some of the other readers. Great character build up. Wouldn't mind another installment of this story.

Beautiful story indeed, hope that there's another chapter

It's amazing how someone aged 23-26 can write in first person for a character who is 36. Great attention to detail.

Excellent work! I really liked this and agree with those before me that the redeeming feature of your work is in the character presentation. Readers need to feel they know the people within a story and to relate to their situations: you have a way of completing this so simply, without over-doing it. Now that I have found your stories I will read the rest; all of which I am sure will be equally pleasing and very effective in the readers' arousal department I am sure. Keep writing...you are good! :)

Excellent work! I really liked this and agree with those before me that the underlying feature of your work is in the character presentation. Readers need to feel they know the people within a story and to relate to their situations: you have a way of completing this so simply, without over-doing it. Now that I have found your stories I will read the rest; all of which I am sure will be equally pleasing and very effective in the readers' arousal department I am sure. Keep writing...you are good! :)

Heart warming that two people can follow their hearts regardless of other peoples meaningless opinions.