All Comments on 'Blueprints Of A Happy Life'

Heart warming that two people can follow their hearts regardless of other peoples meaningless opinions.

Excellent work! I really liked this and agree with those before me that the underlying feature of your work is in the character presentation. Readers need to feel they know the people within a story and to relate to their situations: you have a way of completing this so simply, without over-doing it. Now that I have found your stories I will read the rest; all of which I am sure will be equally pleasing and very effective in the readers' arousal department I am sure. Keep writing...you are good! :)

Excellent work! I really liked this and agree with those before me that the redeeming feature of your work is in the character presentation. Readers need to feel they know the people within a story and to relate to their situations: you have a way of completing this so simply, without over-doing it. Now that I have found your stories I will read the rest; all of which I am sure will be equally pleasing and very effective in the readers' arousal department I am sure. Keep writing...you are good! :)

It's amazing how someone aged 23-26 can write in first person for a character who is 36. Great attention to detail.

Beautiful story indeed, hope that there's another chapter

This is a beautiful story...I liked reading this one. I would have to agree with some of the other readers. Great character build up. Wouldn't mind another installment of this story.

Great character development! A great story with such developed & likable characters will leave readers wanting more. So 'More please'!

And thank you for sharing

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Hope for a follow-up ?

Nice to know they went into the sunset,hand in hand,and......?

Thanks for a good story.

Overall good story, almost too short but better that than too long. 5*