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Sxualchocol8Sxualchocol829 days ago

Nooooo! What's Dougie waiting for? Why didn't he talk to his dad?! What the heck? I'm so invested - it's like General Hospital (GenXers get it)! Hurry up and post the next part, please?!?! Lol

Great job, CLM! Keep up the good work.

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SlithyToveSlithyTove29 days ago

It's hard to believe that Trin and Tom left just a couple of days after the kidnapping, without seeing her parents at all, and then it's radio silence for literally months before she gets a message from Officer Dan to mention what's going on with the case. I know things move more slowly in the Midwest than in New York, but come on!

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