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by Lycandope

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Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature11 months ago

Gorgeous prose. Good progression. No payoff? Where will this go?

JollyrogeringJollyrogering10 months ago

Who is Simon? Where did he go?

Your descriptive is fascinating but lacking in purpose: Why a jack-0-lantern pumpkin? Why 3 pigs? What happened to the other 4 women (do we have all of their names)?

So.... find a purpose in your script. My "like it" assessment is based on your use of descriptive adjectives and adverbs.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This seems incomplete 3 stars if this is it

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