All Comments on 'Bobby-Jack Pt. 05'

I really like this story, but what the hell that they have to screw around......

Well this was one of my favorite stories untill these tow horn dogs wanted to fuck around, I am positive Malcolm who I really dislike wants to fuck up Clay' life because he wants Clay. Now for Clay what is the matter with his head as I thought he was so in love with Bobby- Jack, and they just had to get married. I really liked these two guys, but now I am so pissed off with them that the just let their Dicks run their life. What the fuck is wrong with them, I love your other stories, but the guys in those you know they are just in for the sex. I have a friend who read this story, and told me I told you so.....gay guys can never commit because all they want is dick.....so why get married, and he doesn't believe that two guys can really love each other, and want no other for sex ever. What can I say this story proves his theory, I still love your writing though

I liked the story until you had them cheating on each other, & you can't end a story this way!!!!! Please finish it however it ends.

Yeah ch 4 and 5 are major disappointments. Better as separate stories with different characters, but not as a follow on to 1-3.