All Comments on 'Bodie and Karma Pt. 01'

Wonderful beginning!

5

Is she pregnant or did she have child before they met and now............. (seems to soon to know the sex of the fetus if she just found out she is pregnant) hmmmmmm.......

Great story - compelling characters, nice tension between very different people, and a nasty surprise for a cliffhanger! Part 2 soon, please!

Sounds like something she should have brought up before the marriage. Make you wonder what other lies she might be hiding.

or hopefully not bred by someone else.......

Love the name "Karma." Can't wait for the next part.

Awesome so far - 4.8*

Excellent start, with one helluva cliffhanger

5stars

I give this part 5 stars after reading the second part truly a great story

Readers you must read part 2 !