All Comments on 'Body Shifters: C.L.A.I.R.E. Ch. 02'

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cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 16 years ago
ooh

enjoying it even more! Can't wait for the next chapter!

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Loving it

I really like how you used terminology and jargon it adds a lot to the story and shows detail. Good and interesting though it needs a break from sex, like interaction from a phone call or he talks to someone else or something.

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 3 years ago
Interesting

sequel, with how the 'descendants' are Filipina and otherwise. Love the seemingly random fluctuations to this.

What a shame I'm reading this so late, as I would have loved to suggest they continued to have the same biological imperative, but toned down, to where they could help the professor decipher them, and tantalize his mind with their intelligence. What a deepening of their characters this would have provided.

Still a 5, for the variations in this installment.

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