All Comments on 'Body Swap'

Heh, karma's a fucking bitch, ain't it? Sucks to be him; now he'll know exactly what he put countless women through over and over again for seven months, and he completely deserves it.

That's what happens, fucker...not quite so erotic for me, but a damn good story nonetheless.

Now what happens to him behind bars will be well worth the read. I like the concept.

This sissy slut would LOVE to swap bodies with a woman.

Loved the story and it could not have had a better ending, real justice.

Would have made a great Twilight Zone story (TV-MA version). Loved the ending. Rod Serling would have loved it also.

I actually liked it until you said "transgender" wrong. Like seriously that part was unbelievably confusing. If they're a trans man then he should be called HE and Robert. Try to be respectful. That's not the character, that's your writing. Ruined it for for me

it was well written but a bit predictable. How about a story that continues with there lives after the switch

But I loved it anyway

Got one over me, you did. It was between a woman and a male of tiny stature. Thought that would be the twist. Found it a bit lame to incorporate as a twist, but then again I'm too stupid to remember that you would have a monster waiting in the bushes doing the twist while flipping the bird at passers-by. Would never have guessed. Double wow on thank you.

I loved the scene where he kidnapped the girl from the bathroom and the explanations to some of the actions he performed. Really scaly character. And yes, there is almost nothing worse than someone going down on you when you reeaallly don't want them to.

Shot for story.

Disappointing, overall. The summary led me to believe the plot would revolve around Robert getting his comeuppance after the body swap, but instead the story cut off before that could happen.

I'm not going to complain about your misuse of trans terminology in the story, since I figured it was just in-character for the characters involved. I do have to wonder why Lucinda's brother would want to take the body of his sister's rapist, though. Is Lucinda okay with seeing Robert every time she interacts with her brother?

I liked it. You should make a part 2 about her time in prison.

I told my girlfriend that I wanted to make the guy who molested her a child young, healthy, and an empath so that he could literally feel her pain for a l-o-n-g time, but this is just as good.

It's starting to be exciting!!! We need to know what happened next

I was going to say it would be horrible for the sister to be confronted by the body of her rapist. But she never saw him so she wouldn't recognise him if her father didn't tell her who he was.

Now that's some cosmic karma for you! A good read, but not exactly erotica.

I do agree with the other comment that it’s not erotic, it does fall squarely into the horror category, still it couldn’t have happened to a nicer guy.

Wow, the more I think about the story the more horrific it becomes. Can you imagine the horror of poor Linda when she gets a hug from her new big brother, why is he so familiar?

Not so sure I’d be inclined to agree with the “body swap” method of justice though, if it was along the lines of literal brain swap then all the neural pathways would still be those of a young person. So even though they’re in a much older body their brain hasn’t served that time in prison. Only dealing with a shortened lifespan and the identity crisis of seeing a different person in the mirror isn’t enough punishment for people (m/f) like him.

Tess (UK)

No one is mentioning that bit about bleach up the cooch? Nothing like permanently damaging and sterilizing women. Gross.

Hell yes, bad ass story, I love a dark ending and just desserts.

Love the twist.

Interesting story, but to short.It should tell what happened in those 7months.

Ha! That was awesome!!!

Karma is a bitch😈