All Comments on 'Bondage Asylum'

Hopefully lots more episodes in the pipeline ?

2*, just to be clement

This is a good start to the story. Very enjoyable, and I could see myself at a more sane version of the facility. I do find it to be a pity that it escalated so fast to full confinement and an indefinite stay.

I would have preferred it to start slower with less bondage but for the inmate to slowly find himself more and more bound and locked into a longer stay slowly over time as a punishment for his actions. That way there would be a better feeling of growth and conflict to the story.

I hope this route will still produce a great story though.

This is the first I have ever written so I would appreciate any feedback in the comments. I may make further chapters later

Very nice. I hope you write more, either this story or another one.

I would change the perspective from you to I. And a wrap story that makes clear that the person who narrates the story is free again. To make clear that it was scary but still consensual bdsm.

This is an excellent ride. Thank you. I love the pace and his indefinite stay leaving that trepidation... This is a genius, exciting concept. Id appreciate a female inmate.

When will your next write be in this series?

This is an Amazing story!!!!! Please continue :-)