All Comments on 'Bondage in Office'

I don't actually like third person stories.

I agree with fantasy_god, who presumably meant 2nd person perspective; which places the reader into the story narrative.

The Tags are all wrong for this, it’s not CNC he just ignored her limits and punished her whilst he was angry which is a big no no. Bound her too tightly and left her unsupervised then there’s a gang bang ?? No idea from the information provided if this was something that they’d previously discussed and agreed to.

It has potential to be very erotic but as it stands it’s poor BDSM.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

Well, I agree with Tess. The story lacked content and skipped around with pov's. I did not know who was commenting at times. Needs better delineation of who is speaking or thinking. He ignored her limits which is a big no no. Average but a reasonably good start for a first story.