All Comments on 'Bonehead'

What a lucky guy

that was pretty hot

One would think, after so many submissions, a person would understand the importance of the rules of the language.

The use of logic would be nice too.

Really rough start on this. The MC isn't very likable, and the trope of the nerd with a hot sister who does nothing to help her brother get successful with girls is way overused. Still, it ended up being decent.

Well done. Enjoyed it immensely.

Loved it! Super fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

I enjoyed the story, gave it 5*. Love the trope of a nerd breaking out of his shell and would love to see many more chapters.

I was confused though as I thought he had gone down on his sister and Mandy but when the coach was there it seemed like the coach was his first time oral on a girl.

Maybe I am just not remembering correctly.

All in all, an enjoyable little romp.

Would love to read a 2nd chapter. Maybe have mom catch the sibs and join in.

Started out a lot better than it finished.....

Great story and a fantastic read, presented very well -- pure fantasy though but you wrote it so well it seem almost realistic. And none of that stuff ever happened to me - I got shipped off to an all boys boarding school in the middle of nowhere in Vermont.

Again, just fun to read.

I hope your working on more chapters of this, this, like him doing Gao.....

Good story. There needs to a chapter 2 where Jamrs has sex with the cheerleaders even his sister. I am sure Samantha and Kim would love to have a few more rounds of sex with James during the Summer

Really good story, really well described all the way through,

Very sexy storey, loved it. Definitely needs more chapters, at least one for the summer and another,

For when he starts at Uni and gets together with Mrs Jefferson. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This needs at least one more chapter “Summer Fun” then maybe chapter three “Off to College “.

hope you continue.

Great story. Really hot, hit a lot of the right buttons.

I enjoyed this story a lot I gave maximum note, but I hope to read more adventures of bonehead to see if he's improving his skills in confidence to seduce the women who please hin, during this summer, after in the university, and after when he will begin his active life till a family or harem.

I didn't like it. Another story about gratuitous and meaningless sex. 1*.

I'm a fan of all of you work on here and you didn't disappoint. Great story....

Lucky, lucky guy !

Chapter 2, The Summer James spoiled the cheer squad.

Chapter 3, Mrs. Jefferson and Jenny share the wealth at school.

Chapter 4 The sorority house doesn't need no stinkin' jocks!

Chapter 5. Mrs. Jefferson aims James at a deserving few who need "help" to break out of their shells.

This can go on a long, long time.

God the filthy cocksucker sucks many more cocks and swallows hot cum everyday of the year more than a filthy whore does.

Lost me at the orgy and tracher involvement. What a load of shit

Please continue this story, there’s a lot more to tell.

Another loser Adonis. This site loves the loser

Great story, well written, and I love the surprise ending. Protagonist is a touch cliche but five stars anyway!

Great story enjoyed it. Love Jwswingle’s suggestions!

Would have liked a happier ending but the story was pretty realistic for fiction. Great work and thanks for sharing this with us.

Lost me with the orgy

I'd like to actually see this one continued...

Needs a sequel. Love to see the twins relationship progress in college.